Here's a story of a girl,
Living in the lonely world,
A hidden note, A secret crush,
A little boy who talks too much.

Well, I'm standing in the crowd,
And when you smile I check you out,
But you don't even know my name,
You're too busy playing games,

And I want you too know,
If you lose your way,
I won't let you go.

If I cut my hair,
If I change my clothes,
Will you notice me?

If I bite my lip,
If I say hello,
Will you notice me?


PROFILEY

An introduction about yourself (:

lonely gal in the rain...

Jiayi Kuroneko

b'dae: 16 nov 1997

matchmaker

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MIZ EVERYONE!!! {tears...}

DESIRESY
MY DESIRES!

[ ]new matchmaking job --- hai, can't mm, all gals

[ ]new hp*ALL MINE* --- juz spoiled it

[x]new computer*ALL MINE*

[ ]my BFF in CF --- all go dif sch{tears}

[x]new fwenz

[ ]HIM

[ ]someone who will understand me

LEAVE ME A TAGY

MY IPOD


MusicPlaylist
Music Playlist at MixPod.com

AUDREY. HUILING. YANLIN. QIUYAN. JUNKO. JESSICA. EILEEN. JERLYNN. YIHAN. QILING. CFPS. KAILI. YONGHAN. MRSCHRISLIM. XULAOSHI. LAYHIAN. HUIMIN. FARIS. 6Sincere~2009. SHERBY. MELISSA. JIAYI(sak). JINGYIN+JIAYI. 1o7CLASS!!!. NCCair. JOEL(assign) SUCHEN

ARCHIVES;

ImageChef Word Mosaic - ImageChef.com Visual Poetry - ImageChef.com May 2009 June 2009 September 2009 November 2009 December 2009 January 2010 February 2010 March 2010 April 2010 June 2010 July 2010 August 2010 September 2010 October 2010 April 2011

CREDITS;

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Blogger.
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Splatter Brushes
Lyrics of the song "Notice Me" by Zetta Bytes

Wednesday, September 1, 2010
10:42 PM

REFLECTION :)

Reflecting on my poem, I found that writing a poem was actually quite tough. I had to find the right words to describe the oil spill and to evoke feelings in the readers. Other than that, I also had to use the appropriate poetic devices at the right places. For example, I used imagery to enhance the devastating effects of the oil spill. Through this, I hope to let the reader paint a vivid picture of what had happened.

I spent some time writing my first draft and found that it was quite hard. I surfed the web for some ideas to write, but I still did not have any ideas. However, inspiration struck when I looked at some pictures of oil spills.

After letting my friends read through my draft and comment on it, I then started to make some changes to the poem. I used my friends' comments and changed parts of it. For example, there was a stanza which described about dark skies and black clouds. I wanted it to seem like something bad was happening, but it sort of had another effect. Hence, I made some changes and was quite pleased with the overall result.

From this experience, I learnt that poetry is not just about writing in a fancy way to describe things, but is actually an effective way for us to express our feelings through words. It was really interesting to write a poem and I hope that my poetry skills would improve after writing more poems.

Will you ever notice me...